Sunday, February 20, 2011

Lost Souls by TheWhitePen

What if your soul mate is born seventy years after your death? Could you wait? AU/AH No Vamps
Hey Everyone! This is of course the Infamous Tyggy, late as always, but I bring gifts.
I found this gem one day when i got a slew of emails from a C2 community I subscribed too.I won't lie I passed this story up twice (man do i regret it now) but something about this story screamed for me to read it. I couldn't resist the pull of the story and took my first steps into my newest addiction. Like most who are fairly new to fandom, I was a little skeptical about reading because of the summary. Edward dead, Bella Alive no way in hell she could pull it off.

 But any doubt I had was crushed after reading the first chapter. Talented is too little of a word to describe this lady's abilities. Everything in the first chapter captured my attention at once. The story is written incredibly well and I am in awe of the raw creativity and imagination this woman possesses. Her concept of the connection between this world and next is so well crafted that even I looked over my shoulder a few times wondering If someone could possibly be around me just waiting for someone to remember them. Now the story is fucking awesome,this bitch knows her shit, and she knows it well. Her characters are complex and the pace of the story will keep you wanting to know more and more about her character's background. Everyone seems to have a story, and if you are as greedy as I am, I'm positive you'll want to know more as well.

Bella in this story, has moved to a new quaint little town, starting over from a very questionable pass which seems to be unraveling as the story continues to develop. She buys a house she adores, though it needs a bit of tlc.The only drawback to the property that bothers everyone but Bella, is that there's a small little cemetery right behind her new home. She buys the house against the relator's advice and settles in comfortably, relishing in her purchase. As the story progresses, we see Bella become draw to a lonely little grave at he far corner of the cemetery, belonging to Edward Masen. Just saying or thinking his name, drew him from an eternity of sleep and brought her to his attention. Even though she didn't know him, she developed a small connection to the fallen soldier and their story is only beginning:

"One grave at the far end of the cemetery seemed to draw me in. It was a lone gray marble headstone. Nothing fancy, just the finely carved letters of the name and dates. The only decoration was a small American Flag that had been recently planted by a veterans group on Memorial Day. He had been a soldier. A tear slid down my cheek, and for some reason I felt a profound sense of loss as I leaned down to read the words on the stone:
Edward A. Masen
February 27, 1900 – October 25, 1918"

Edward P.O.V
"The light flared, brighter than it had in ages, startling and disorienting in its brief flash. But it was over almost as soon as it started, leaving behind only the ghost of an image. A face. The beautiful, sad face of a woman with a tear running down her cheek. I tried desperately to hold on to this image, to sear it into my consciousness before it slowly faded back into the endless black night."


This one chapter had me running to the next button, but i couldn't go on without leaving her words of encouragement to continue, and for a job Greatly done. Don't be scared to read this.  Open your mind to the impossible and new ranges of fanfiction. I promise you will thank me just after reading one chapter. It's well written, original, imaginative and downright fuckawesome.
It is extremely difficult for me not to spoil the story for you. But here's one more sneak peek into her story.


"Lying in bed I was exhausted, but couldn't seem to fall asleep. My mind kept replaying the contents of the diary and what I had learned about Rose and Edward. When I finally did drift off to sleep, I dreamed of the soldier in the picture. Just like the picture, his features and his uniform were all in sepia tones of brown and gray, all except for his piercing green eyes."

Edward p.o.v
"I drifted on to an upstairs room where I found an angel lying on a bed curled up under the covers. Her body hummed, its life force radiating into the space around her. It was this force that had pulled me to her, and I basked in its glow."

 If  that's not enough to make you curious enough to read, I don't know what is. Trust in me, and the author, You'll love this story. It's nothing like anything I've ever read and I'm absolutely positive you'll love this even more than I do.


Read and Review Babes, This is one of the author's that truly deserve it.
Muaaahhh!
Happy reads! Look out for My new interview with TheWhitePen coming up soon.


~~**Tyggy~~**

Sunday, February 6, 2011

Four Weeks by Elvirina

Summary:

Follow the journey of a destined love between a FEMALE Jasper and Alice, who were brought together by fate, and bonded by a Raw, Intense and an unfiltered connection towards one another. Femme slash.

Before i begin I would like to kick everyone is the shins *kicks* This story should have way more review that jusy fucking 32!

This:

Chapter one:

"Jasper." I said, declaring my name. I was just a few beats too late to be professional, but I was taken aback by the stunning and beautiful girl in front of me. Her hair was dark and thick around the angelic face. She was mesmerizing.

"Jasper?" She echoed and frowned, her voice like a light summer's breeze. I smiled sheepishly as that was the normal reaction to my name. Seeing my name on a business card, a person would surely expect a man, hair on the chest, a hand like a shovel, and definitely packing in the lower department, but I was all female. My mother had just refused to pick a new name when her first born was a girl and not a boy as expected.

"Yes." I smiled cordially.

Is worth Way more the 32 fucking review!! I was sure as hell not expecting THAT when I first read this fine piece of literature. Now I must say when it comes to picking Fics to read I’m down right picky. I can find SOMETHING wrong with almost anything I read. I hate poor grammar and when I see it, it stays engraved in my brain forever. So it is a Miracle that I find something that in less than 10 chapters has me enthralled and away from Twitter. But this story was just…just…just FUCKING AWESOME (I just realized that I have said way to many fuckings in this review already but that is how awesome this fic is). Not to mention the Author is a totes awesome person, Who has become a good friend of mine on Twitter.

.Now if I have one bad thing to say about this story, it would have to be Fucking Leah…literally. This Leah is such a bitch! And I don’t mean in a good way!

Chapter 3:

"What, Leah?" I groaned.

"Oh, you got it bad." She teased. I glared at her, stunned all her anger from last week had dispersed. I had expected her to be all up in my face, barking orders and treating me like shit for a long time.

"I don't know what you are talking about and if I did, it is none of your business anyway." I finished grimly.

"Oh Jasper, get over yourself. I did." She said snidely. "With a nice, young and fresh piece of pussy Saturday... and Sunday."

"God, you are crude sometimes." I sighed and shook my head.

That my friends is a bitch in heat. But this story is an all around good read! So –kicks again- Go fucking read and then review it! A story this god deserves to be read over and over. Its unique and different, Its not something you would see day to day. This is a sparkling gem in some coal? Idk, im bad at analogies. All I know that it’s a damn good read, and that for me is very hard to find. I can go HOURS looking for something to read and not find it at all. Don't believe me? Prove me wrong and check it out then! You won't be sorry. Just be sure to leave her some love and tell her we sent you.

Le Interview With Elvirina


Day: Ello!

Elvirina: hi there

Day: How are you?

Elvirina: Good, eating candy...

Day: lucky bitch...

Elvirina: I think so too... my faviorite

Day: -glares- Lets get on with the interview, shall we?

Day: lol

Elvirina: we shall, ask away

Day: So explain to me, Where in the world did you get the idea for this fic?

Elvirina: Mainly it started as a spin on my story Starting Over. Four Weeks and Starting Over are linked. It is the same Alice featured in both stories. But I just couldn't let go of the romance between Jasper and Alice. I had to explore that and what it would be like between them.I wanted to move outside the box

Day: You might kill me but...I have not read Starting Over is the Jasper in that story also a Girl?

Elvirina: Yep... Chapter 14 might help you. There Bella meets Jasper for the first time and is absolutely clueless to what the hell Alice is up to. But I wanted both stories to be able to run independently You will also find a physical description of Jasper in that chapter Through Bella

Day: I should read Starting Over then...

Elvirina: I don't think that is my strongest work. You don't have to. But it is a general just a common romance

Day: So what inspires you to write?

Elvirina: Stephanie Meyer... who the fuck else. In the beginning in was original stories, but I might as well bang my head against the wall. There are no online readers in that. But she once said she had all these disjointed stories in her head and then she started to write Twilight. I felt the same way and I was always so ashamed about the shit floating around in my head that i never said anything. So I thought if she could write hers down, I could write mine down as well Lame I know, but it is a nice vent to let my mind run wild and exactly how I want insane I wanted it to go

Day: Did ya have any concern with how your readers -glares at those who have not reviewed- would take the plot?

Elvirina: I am an extremely anxious person, I am the fucking postergirl for selfdoubt. So yeah I am worried, but I am learning to deal with it. I try to shake it off that I don't get reviews, but that doesn't mean I don't evny others. *blushes* My Beta on this story helped at lot, she is open minded and honestly liked the plot

Day: So, is the story that you are posting now the original idea you had or have you tweaked it a bit?

Elvirina: It is generally original. Beta help out, especially with grammar and commented if something didn't sit well with her. Chapter 6 and that heated little lemon I have her to tank for it. I never toned anything down to be more modest. It was more the other way around She pushed me

Day: Many author just wing the story after they have a certain idea, do you do that or do you follow a outline?

Elvirina: I generally have an outline in my head. I write a rough draft and then go back and add over several days. Some things only come to me after I have the rough draft, the parts, I think, adds depth and insight .

Day: Did you have any inspiration for the characteristics of your Jasper?

Elvirina: The original. Sort of calm, resting in her/himself. Someone caring, careful and reading into details. That is how I see SM's Jasper

Day: Why did you choose to make Jasper a woman?

Elvirina: I wanted to experiment. I had a rough idea of an original story I wrote a while back and in that 'Alice' was gay, so I build on that. Also I wanted to do something different to spice up Alice and give a twist to Alice. then I couldn't let go how her relationship with her girlfriend would take it's beginning So that became Jasper

Day: Out of All the chapter you have written which one has been the hardest by far?

Elvirina: One not posted yet. Sent it off to my beta today. I am not even sure I am going to post it.

Day: O.O why are you not sure?

Elvirina: I need to make sure that my story should take that turn in development. As said, my stories are linked and I am working on the future plot. But I probably will end up posting

Day: Which was the easiest Chapter to write?

Elvirina: hmm I think the first 2, I seperated them later when the chapter was too long. The lemons have been a bit challanging to write so that was when things toughened up

Day: Has your story won any awards?

Elvirina: What do you think???????????? NO I basically have no readers. *slapping my thigh* This latest posting was tragic

Day: -shakes head- That is tragic

Elvirina: Yeah a little. I love this story, but I also doubt myself enormously... so I think it is not good enough

Day: Who where your betas for the story? are you close with them?

Elvirina: Her name is Dazzled eyes22 and she is awesome. No I am not close with her, but she is someone I trust implicit for her very valued opinion. she is honest and very constructive in her criticism. When I get her comments have the oppotinuty to look at my chapter with her eyes. That is invaluable to me

Day: And You're pre-readers, who i must say i'm absolutely jealous of, What is thier role in the process? If you have them of course

Elvirina: So hard to find someone who doesn't just say... 'that's great' I only have Dazzled eyes on this one. No one else. Why would you be jealous?

Day: Cause this story is awesome

Elvirina: Oh thank you... *blushing*

Day: -shakes head- You really need to gain more confidence with your writing its a very good story

Elvirina: I try to, but Rome wasn't build in a day. I use Tyggy once in a while to pick her mind and boost my confidence

Day: yeah Tyggy is good at that, She is my beta for Cheater Cheater

Elvirina: Tyggy is very honest and I really like her. Haven't known her for that long

Day: How many chapter are you going to have in the story? Is it close to being finished?

Elvirina: So far I have 9 chapters and an Epi. That will be followed by 2 more chapters from APOV, that is were hard chapter are

About Elvirina:

Name: Nelly

Country: Scandinavia

Age: 30

Penname: Elvirina/Nelly/Thumannle​gend it differes

Twitter Name: Thumannlegend

Favorite music while writing: Depends on what I need to write. Dark for dark and Love for Love. My favorite singer/Songwriter is Tina Dickow and that is for love and reasoning. Skunk Anansie for darker times. But it varies all the time. My taste is very electic

Favorite Author: Favorite Author. Mkystic... she is fuck awesome and makes us all fade in comparison

Favorite Undiscovered Fic: I am not sure.

Favorite Book: From my teen years. The winter of Fire, by sheryl Jordan

Favorite Site to Update: my own lousy FF.net site... oh god no. Er perhaps dirtycheekymonkies. I have an One shot running there next week

My Muse: Uhm, my fucked up head at times. But that also differes. Music of different artist. A deep meaningful singersong writer can really ring my bell

Hand or type: hand write... what is that. Last I tried that was 1999 I think

Fandoms: Twilight

First Fanfic ever read: Emancipation Proclamation

PDF APPROVAL: They can make pdf and take it with them. I sometimes do for my Ipod

Translate: It's okay to translate

Without permission: so not cool.

Taboo: I am a little divided on that one. I fear there are so many YOUNG readers, and some of the shit around here is not for kids. But on the other hand I am very much in favor of freedom of speech. So Young people should be protected, but you should also be able to write what you want

Why should other read your story? Give One Reason: Broaden a narrowminded view of the world or a sexy story. What ever tickles their fancy. Shit, I don't know. Why do we chose a story... it differs



So there we go, I shall now leave with some man Candy ♥


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